Erred

Published on by Susi Bocks

 

You as my Lover 
acting like you care

You liked to Hover
we made a great pair

But you were a Shover
found out too late

So I ran away for Cover
to escape this fate

Tarun Savvy – Unsplash.com

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    1. Thanks, Eugenia! Sorry it took me a while to follow up but unfortunately, WP sent this comment to Spam! Grrrr As to the style, it’s not a Triolet but it started out as a specific type. For the life of me, I cannot remember what style it was. Anyways, I couldn’t get it to work within the restrictions and this is how it ended up. :)

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    1. It was! But for the life of me can’t find the name for it now. Started with a Th though. Lol I’d not ever seen it before and thought I would give it a try. According to the rules, I got it about half right! Ha! ;) I’ll see if I can figure out the name and get back to you.

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