You as my Lover
acting like you care
You liked to Hover
we made a great pair
But you were a Shover
found out too late
So I ran away for Cover
to escape this fate
Erred
You as my Lover
acting like you care
You liked to Hover
we made a great pair
But you were a Shover
found out too late
So I ran away for Cover
to escape this fate
I love this!! ❤️😎🎶🎶🌟
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❤ Thank you!!
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I love this, Susi. Your words are quite relatable. Plus, I like the way it is structured. Is it a Triolet?
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Thanks, Eugenia! Sorry it took me a while to follow up but unfortunately, WP sent this comment to Spam! Grrrr As to the style, it’s not a Triolet but it started out as a specific type. For the life of me, I cannot remember what style it was. Anyways, I couldn’t get it to work within the restrictions and this is how it ended up. 🙂
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The emotion and the way you presented this.
I can understand this is hard to describe the emotion behind this poem but you wrote it well.
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Thanks, I appreciate your feedback and your kind words. I was experimenting with a new style with this. 🙂
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Susi, is this a specific type of poetry form? I really like it!
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It was! But for the life of me can’t find the name for it now. Started with a Th though. Lol I’d not ever seen it before and thought I would give it a try. According to the rules, I got it about half right! Ha! 😉 I’ll see if I can figure out the name and get back to you.
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Very well written! ❤
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Thanks, Deborah! ❤
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This is beautiful.
https://www.flyhiee.com/reflection/more-human-less-humanity/
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Thanks! May I ask what makes it beautiful for you? Your feedback is appreciated!
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I am looking forward to reading more.
Thank you
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Thank you! 🙂
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welcome ❤
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