Inspired by What do you see #227
birds fluttering
awaken my essence
goodbye to the depths
where i had lain
a bright full moon
is calling for my presence
i resurrect
Inspired by What do you see #227
birds fluttering
awaken my essence
goodbye to the depths
where i had lain
a bright full moon
is calling for my presence
i resurrect
I Write Her 
Nice poem.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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Nice one! The message of emerging from darkness into light is clear and beautiful…
~David
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<3 Thank you so much, David!
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Love it, Susi!
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So happy you enjoyed it, Chris!
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Spooky response to the prompt, and so well-written. A revenant perhaps?! Yikes!
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Glad you enjoyed the story. I appreciate the praise. In a way, it is a return from the dead. I imagine depression is a lot like that.
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Having suffered through post-partim depression, I can’t think of a better analogy.
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Thank you!
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Wow Susi. This is like a Werewolf becoming human in the moonlight. Love it. Well done.
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Kinda sorta. Thanks so much, Mason! I’m happy you enjoyed it. :)
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You’re welcome,
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Your take Susi is refreshing and a wee bit spooky!
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:) Dark is good! ;) Thanks, Val.
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so lovely, Susi 🤍
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Appreciate it, Destiny! <3
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Such a beautiful poem Susi. There are darker tones about resurrection from lying in the dark. A wonderful piece. Thanks for joining in.
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Yes, I’m glad you could see the darker tones, Sadje! Wonderful image to be inspired by. Thank YOU!
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Thanks. 🙏🏼
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A beautiful take Susi! Well done :-)
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:) Thanks, Carol Anne!
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Interesting in that the bridge seems to cross over nothing.
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Yes, I saw it as empty, but still a continuation of the cycle of living.
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I love this entire piece starting with the surprising pairing of the image with the title – there’s a wonderful Edna St. Vincent Millay poem by that name, and I’ve loved the word ever since. You’ve captured so much in far fewer lines! 🌕
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Thank you for letting me know about the poem, Sun! I just learned the word today and also fell in love with it. Plus it paired well with the feeling of this piece. I’m glad you enjoyed it! <3
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I LIKE!!!
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I LOVE that you liked it, Nan! :)
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