

Inspired by Eugenia’s Weekly Prompt – Survival & Reena’s Exploration Challenge #221
a series of building blocks
set the foundation
master them well
or fall like dominos
but know
life is a strategic gamble
not mastered
only with good guidance
individuality, authenticity, and risk add value
a quality of life
maybe
Wow! Excellent take.
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Appreciate your reaction, Indira! ❤
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Excellent take Susi!
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Thanks so much, Radhika! 🙂
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Wonderful write, Susi. Love the ending. ❤️
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Appreciate that, Jeff! Glad you enjoyed it. ❤
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
You’ll be alright ….by Susi Bocks
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A lovely song, and the last three lines are awesome.
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❤ Thanks, Reena!
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Great take Susi.
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Appreciate it, Sadje! ❤
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You’re welcome
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Our building blocks are just the beginning of our life path. No matter our education, using common sense, being responsible, and making the right choices will help us survive. Maybe is a daunting thought during these difficult times.
This is an excellent piece, Susi! Brava!
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Yes, it is because life is unpredictable in what it sends our way. One must always be on their toes! Thanks so much for the praise, Eugenia! ❤
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I love how your poem conveys the message so beautifully – that life is a continual flow met skilfully with authenticity and that quality of life remains tentative depending on our choices.
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Thank you, Pragalbha! Yes, you’ve understood the message I wanted to convey. 🙂
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