

Who are we on our own?
There was something in the way
she dismantled herself—
the way she pulled fire from the sun
and burned;
the way she lay face down
in the rubble, breathing in
ash and despair;
the way she tasted the destruction
before she carved herself anew
from the black sky.
This is an excerpt from a piece I’ve written for my book.
Freestylin’ To: Echoberyl – A Prey by Bruised Rose Blossoms
how many times
do I have to scrape the walls
your face climbs
the mountain of my heartbreak
but all I can do
is rain down upon the landscape
of our painted past with the fire of regret
you were wearing black
and I couldn’t take my hands off your hips
or my eyes off of the sparkle of mischief
that was dancing from a thousand yous
the broken mirror
on the floor
the throbbing heart
in my chest
something’s got to give
because I cannot live like this anymore
but still we dance
inside the earthquaking halls
of my dilapidated memory
and somehow
if I’m honest
I still love
what we were
This is amazing writing! Thank you Susi for sharing Kristin’s work. Much appreciated.
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This is why I share them! So happy you enjoyed them, Suzette! ❤
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I did indeed. Cheers 😊
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Cheers! 🙂
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Powerful and impactful poem
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Both poems are so evocative
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Agreed!
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😍
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