i want to avenge my broken heart
why do these lame excuses for men
promising comfort
always give out a ticket to hell instead
as i sit waiting for him
i cram my anger
here in the spot where love was
it gets me nowhere
it pulls me down deep inside
maybe i’m too used to this empty space
I Write Her 
This took a couple of readings. So full of complicated thoughts, including the way women tend to beat themselves up over the partner who wasn’t worth anything to us, really. Well done!
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Thanks so much, Amy! Yes, unfortunately, we do. It becomes a long drawn-out situation when it really shouldn’t be.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Powerful and poignant piece, Susi!
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Thanks, Eugenia! :)
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You’re welcome, Susi! 😊
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Wow! That’s a powerfully enelganr poem, with much feeling. Beautiful, Susi. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Jeff. <3 Not sure what "enelganr" was though?
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Oh my goodness. …powerfully elegant. I wasn’t even close. Lol. You’re most welcome, Susi. ❤️ Have a lovely coming week!
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I wasn’t sure, didn’t want to assume! No worries. Thank you and you too, Jeff! <3
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awwww love it and I’m with you holding your heart Susi!
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Thank you, Cindy! I appreciate that.
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You’re so welcome Susi!!! 💖💖💖
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Intense introspection…
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Those situations require it!
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Such a poignant poem Susi. Wonderful use of the words
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Thanks, Sadje! <3
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You’re welcome ☺️
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