nature seems to experience acceptance
far greater than the average human
the cards they are dealt just are
no rebuttal or strain
calm and peace
acknowledged and lived
just like strife and undue unrest
it’s the ebb and flow of life
can humanity just realize that too
go with the flow
get there without interruption
their brain cells just chillin’
is it really too much to ask
Wow a provocative piece that makes one really think. I especially like this Susi:
“calm and peace
acknowledged and lived
just like strife and undue unrest
it’s the ebb and flow of life”
Life is hard on us and why does it have to be so hard. Lovely work!
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Thank you, Joni! ❤
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You are very welcome. ❤️❤️
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Yes, life is much simpler when we don’t judge ☺️💕 Lovely poem Susi
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🙂 Happy you enjoyed it, Christine! ❤
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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A very nice thought expressed beautifully!
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Thank you, Vignesh!
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Welcome 🙂
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Lovely! And not too much to ask. Inspires me to take a deep breath.
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❤ Ahhhhhh. Thanks, VJ!
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So welcome!
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Coming peace and solace in nature is one of the greatest blessings.
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Absoluely!
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👍👍👍👍
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I think these words from Walt Whitman aptly sum up your poem Susi ..
“After you have exhausted what there is in business, politics, conviviality, and so on – have found that none of these finally satisfy, or permanently wear – what remains? Nature remains.” ― Walt Whitman
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Indeed! Thanks for sharing that piece, Ivor. 🙂
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My pleasure Susi
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yes it is
we must all remain on our knees
as if to please a higher power
gee
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LOL right.
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Humans are a pugnacious species – I think some people are only happy when they are stirring the pot!
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Great description, Val! I would agree, many are. 🙂
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