Inspired by Sadje’s What do you see #89
consciousness appears
as if out of nowhere
bits and slices of memories
dot the timeline
on this journey
going towards the white light
each ride is different
of course
some experience many tumbles
along the way
others coast as if effortless
no worse for the wear
yet the hope is for an exquisite run
filled with exhilaration and joy
experiencing terrific sights
on this adventure
bouncing to new heights
without so much as a scratch
with hope our final turn towards the blind takes us gently
Beautiful take on the prompt, Susi 🙂
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Thank you, Shweta!
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You are most welcome 😊🤗
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Wonderful depth and beautiful writing.
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Thank you for your praise, Jude! 🙂
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Aha. Would love to take the road trip and the hope you portrayed is beautiful
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Thanks, Shantanu!
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My absolute pleasure
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Beautiful imagery, Susi, I love how you describe the journey of life towards the white light of NDE. (Near Death Experience). ❤❤❤
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That “white hole” in the image is what inspired me. 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it, Carolyn! ❤
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❤❤❤
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A roller coaster ride through the ups and downs of life… we should all travel with hope. I enjoyed this, Susi! 🙂
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So glad you did, Chris! 🙂
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Journey of life…love your take, Susi!
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Yes, Punam! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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A very different take on the prompt! Very good ❤️
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Thank you, Hemalatha! I appreciate that! ❤
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Wonderful! It does make me smile and maintain hope that I will continue to travel until I reach “home”
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Glad you enjoyed it, Val! May your journey be wonderful! 🙂
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i drink the irish beer
as my surgery draws near
ah so
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You have surgery scheduled? For what and when?
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friday for a new lead on my pacemaker. even humanists pray. my hyperbole aka euphamism is this highest hopes and best wishes bocks! ha ha ha
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Oh! May you have competent docs and caring nurses. Yeah, no. I don’t pray but I surely wish you the best outcome!
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well dr osborne is a cad.
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Oh no!
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yeah hey susi did you wish the dali lama a happy bday?
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Nope
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Nicely used as a symbolic idea for travel through time, space or eternity! Love your take Susi. Thanks a lot for joining in
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And the journey through life! Glad you enjoyed it, Sadje! 🙂
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🙏🙏🙏
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Yet the hope is for…different for each of us but just as powerful a hope. Great job.
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Very true! Thanks, Anita! 🙂
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Love your take on the prompt, Susi; and the last line? Superb!! Love it. ❤️
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Thanks, Jeff! I love how this came together. The inspiration was the white circle in the background. Funny where my brain takes it. ❤
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You’re welcome, Susi. Ahhh, I see, how cool. Love it. ❤️
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I’m glad you did! ❤
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