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A
brightness
permeates
in and around
the air. So joyous,
feeling light and free now.
Let’s enjoy this wondrous time.
Come play like in our youth again.
No one and nothing could bring us down.
Do you remember how you felt back then?
We escaped into our own little worlds.
Fantasies filled with fresh scenery.
Everything was possible then.
Rich daydreams colored our world.
Sun, fun, and games all day!
Innocent children
at play again.
I sure do
miss it,
friend.
I Write Her 
Wonderful playful memories, childhood innocence. A beautiful post Susi.
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Thank you, Hélène! I enjoyed going back into my youth to reflect on those feelings. :)
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Joyful moments.
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Yes, very much so! :)
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Very nice poem! Loved it!❤️
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! <3
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This is awesome Susi. Both the poem and it’s structure. Kudos.
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Thank you so much for your support! ((hugs)) :)
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You are welcome.😊
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Most refreshing and lends back to our innocence. Beautifully penned double ethree.
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I hadn’t written in that style for a long while. Glad you enjoyed it, Eugenia! :)
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Beautifully done, Susi.
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<3
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Oddly enough, THE SHAPE OF THINGS TO COME (an H.G. Wells classic) came to mind here, leading me to characterize your fine poem as THE SHAPE OF THINGS LONG GONE. Well done (and well shaped).
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:) Thanks, Mister Muse! I take that as a compliment!
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Absolutely ❤️
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<3
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This is so sweet. It felt refreshing and revitalising in it’s words. Brilliant 👍🏻
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Innocence revisited :) I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Nice poem. I like the look of it, and the sound of it. I remember how I felt back then, and I miss it too. 😊
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The easier times. Yeah, they tug at me sometimes too. Thanks, Walt! :)
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You’re very welcome! It’s a very pleasing read. 😊
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:)
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😊
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