Formidable

Published on by Susi Bocks

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Belibr – Deviant Art

you dared to cross me
watch as i brew your ending
with a single hair
bubble, bubble – your trouble
laughing as your life drains out

This Tanka poem inspired by Hélène Vaillant “What Do You See – 10/23/18
Image supplied from the post

Enjoyed creating this, Hélène! Had never tried this type of poem before. :)

13 thoughts on “Formidable”

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  5. Holy shit, this one is stunning, I am loving it.Love the word play, everything about it, it’s totally absolutely cool shit, marvelous. Can’t find words to Express how this one took me in..cool, cooler, coolest…

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