Formidable

gh

you dared to cross me
watch as I brew your ending
with a single hair
bubble, bubble. your trouble
laughing as your life drains out

 

This Tanka poem inspired by Hélène Vaillant “What Do You See – 10/23/18
Image supplied from the post

Enjoyed creating this, Hélène! Had never tried this type of poem before. 🙂

12 thoughts on “Formidable

  1. Holy shit, this one is stunning, I am loving it.Love the word play, everything about it, it’s totally absolutely cool shit, marvelous. Can’t find words to Express how this one took me in..cool, cooler, coolest…

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