It seems like the breeze was getting stronger—the atmosphere’s ferocity matching this bloody scene we were investigating. One man with a broken back, and the other victim, a large crane strangled in its nest. Guess the news people had no life and felt the need to fill their 24-hour cycle. Rumors were floating about a ghost and people into magic in the area. Everyone had a different story to tell and was eager to share it. There was no need to drag anything out of anyone. This apparent crime scene was the highlight of their evening, maybe their entire life.
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Ooh! scary story of mind-puppeteering.
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:) It is meant to be scary, glad it came across! Thanks, Sara!
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this is a quite spooky story! And has me wanting to know more!
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:) lol I know, I know! My pieces tend to be more like teasers. But glad you enjoyed it, Carol Anne!
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All those stories, something was playing with their minds! Intriguing.
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Maybe the real perpetrator had them all in a trance? Thanks for reading and commenting, Keith!
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Appreciate the reblog! :)
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Ha! So many willing to talk!! (a detective’s dream come true!!)
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lol Yep! Thanks for reading, Val!
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Beautifully done, and a very intriguing story, Susi.
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<3 Thank you, Eugenia!
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Most welcome, Susi.
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A great use of the words Susi – you paint a terrifying scene 🙌
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Thanks so much, AJ! :)
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Well, it is an interesting murder scene 😉
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Definitely different from the normal ones. lol Thanks for reading!
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Amazing to me how many varied stories can be told using the same dozen words. Well done.
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Agreed! All our minds think so differently. :) Thank you!
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Loved your story, a gruesome setting, but interesting too.
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Thanks, Diana! Glad I could convey both!
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🙂🥰😀
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I like Sadje find this scene very intriguing!
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Me too! Would love to know why the murderer killed the crane.
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I like your story Susi. Love how you used all those words
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Thanks, Selma! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Very intriguing story Susi
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Thanks, Sadje! :)
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You’re very welcome
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