Redux
When I make the effort
to dig deep
into who you are,
know you are loved.
In awe,
inspired,
captivated,
interested,
dazed,
uplifted.
Yes, in love with your being.
I’ll align myself
up close,
breathing in your talent
and exhaling
knowledge and pride.
You’ve won my heart.
I Write Her 
Susi, “breathing in your talent / and exhaling / knowledge and pride” really got me — such a graceful way to show reverence. Quietly powerful.
~David
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<3 That is so kind of you to say, David. Thank you! But you're right, the line was to show how much we can show love and appreciation.
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🤗
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A beautiful poem, you are talented
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And you are sweet, Diana! Thank you so much for your comment. Appreciate you reading it. <3
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🥰😊🥰
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Your words are profoundly touching and beautifully crafted. You have an incredible gift for expressing deep emotions with grace. I’m truly moved—your talent leaves a lasting impression. Thank you!
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Thank you so much, Devendr! You’ve shared such kind comments. I hope I can always share such uplifting work.
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this was excellent Susi :-)
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I so appreciate that, Carol Anne! <3
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A profound poem my friend.
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<3 Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 😉
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