Redux
where once was substance
a hollow shell
in its place
love bounces off
not even a response
anymore
kindness is foreign
after the tragedy
of betrayal
this voluminous space
of emptiness
is home now
Originally posted 2/7/2019 on I Write Her.
Abandoned
I Write Her 
Lovely poem Susi!
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Thank you so much, Belladonna!
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Nice
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Thank you!
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Have you been peeking into my private life? Sounds like it! Very nicely done.
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lol No! Just exposing my own. ;) Thanks so much, Violet. :0
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A very evocative poem Susi.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re very welcome
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