I pleaded for a release from its grip, my body emitting a cacophony of bone-chilling shrieks. The creature halted as if strategizing. It pounded the cave floor, leaving deep prints. How will this end, I pondered? My eyes began to drift to the top of my skull. I was spent.
I purposely thought of smelling sweet flowers in my garden, but reality brought me back from my reverie. The creature’s breath hit my nostrils; being human, I almost fainted. The scene was surreal yet captivating. Ultimately, I was victorious in finding its weakness and decimating it. Now fallen, it festers.


An intriguing story!
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Glad you enjoyed it, Sara!
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❤️
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Glad you liked it, Diana! <3
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🙂
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A very intriguing story Susi.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Susi this is horror writing at its best (worst?)!
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<3 Thank you, Val! I really appreciate it!
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I like the tension in this, you wove a neat story Susi.
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Thanks, Paul! :) Glad you liked it.
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My pleasure Susi :)
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