tyro human enters life unknowingly
burgeoning forth at a slow pace
percipient as best as it’s able
reaching the pinnacle of life
only to feel a saudade ache
approaching the hoary stage
what is it all for?
tyro human enters life unknowingly
burgeoning forth at a slow pace
percipient as best as it’s able
reaching the pinnacle of life
only to feel a saudade ache
approaching the hoary stage
what is it all for?
Beautifully written Susi.
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Thanks so much, Sadje!
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You’re very welcome
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I don’t know if the pinnacle of life can be found, or in fact if there is actually a pinnacle to be found, …
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Pinnacle was meant more as the peak of physicality, and then the decline that follows.
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Ok … got it 😊🌏
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Wonderful! What a language flex. That hurt my brain, and I loved it.
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Mine too! These were all “new words of the day” that I had learned, and they just fit perfectly together! Glad you thought it was wonderful, Stephen!
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