Inspired by What do you see #232
come
fall into my arms
let me take away your despair
i want to hold you
as the pain passes
from substantial to weightless
take all the time you need
let it all out
it’s okay
soon you’ll feel the heavy sobs lessen
and see the tears dry up
as your breath rhythmically calms down
bud, i promise
you’ll make it through
to this new reality
I Write Her 
We need each other for moments like this. Beautifully penned.
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Yes, we do! Thank you! :)
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My pleasure!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Barbara!
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What a lovely poem. Well done, Susi.
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Thanks so much, Chris!! :)
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A beautifully empathetic poem, well done.
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Thank you so much, Mason!
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Such loving, heartfelt and intense indeed. Thanks.
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Glad you felt that way!
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I love this poem.
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Happy you do, Carrie! Thank you!
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Such a deep, and feeling poetry Susi. Loved how with your words you’ve soothed the turbulent emotions. Thanks for joining in.
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While I know we have to feel our feelings to get past them, it always helps to have someone to lean on through the process. My pleasure!
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You’re absolutely right Susi. A shoulder to lean on or cry on helps us deal way better
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Thanks, Sadje! :)
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You’re always welcome my dear friend
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Cool poem
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Glad you think so, Pat! :)
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A powerful and emotive piece, Susi. Beautifully done.
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Appreciate it, Eugenia! Thank you. :)
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You’re welcome, Susi.
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Love this 🖤
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Thanks, Charmer! <3
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You’re so welcome 😊🖤
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Lovely poem full of hope and compassion.
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