Redux
Oh,
please see
that you must
protect me now.
I’ve given so much
for your survival here.
Take care of me. It’s your turn.
Give to me what will sustain you.
I was beauty, strength, and nourishment.
Your treatment of me shows something ugly.
Originally posted November 14, 2018, on I Write Her.
I Write Her 
Awonderful poem Susi! I enjoyed it immensely! <3
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So glad that you enjoyed it, Carol Anne! <3
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I like how each line is a little longer than the one before, as if the urgency is growing. 🧡🌷
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The is the style of an Etheree, but good point that it “grows.” I can see what you mean by a sense of urgency. Thanks, Kymber!
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She deserves to be loved, and kept safe.
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Absolutely! Thanks, Diana!
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🙂🩷
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I’m good Susi. ❤❤Thanks
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Glad to hear it!
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Beautiful ❤❤Hello Susi, how are you dear friend, hope everything is fine your end?
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Thanks so much, Usha! Hello! It is, how about you?
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Written in 2018 and unfortunately, your words still ring true. Well said, Susi.
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Thank you, Eugenia! Yeah, I wish they didn’t. :(
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You’re welcome, Susi.
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Oh yes, Mother Earth deserves all our care and love. A beautiful plea.
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Most definitely! Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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