Inspired by What do you see #226
there’s a demarcation
of our souls
frigid and unreachable
harder with each step
i attempt to reach you
feels like an endless journey
eventually, i’ll give up
frozen to the bone
careful not to retrace my steps
i refuse to make the same mistakes
I Write Her 
tat was incredible, Susi! :D way to go!
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Absolutely brilliant!
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<3 Thanks so much, Suzette!
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You are most welcome Susi!
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This poem really captures the struggle of trying to bridge the gap between souls. It’s like a journey through icy terrain, with each step feeling harder than the last. But the determination not to repeat past mistakes shines through. Deep and relatable!
~David
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Appreciate it, David! Thank you!
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Very well done, Susi!
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Thanks so much, Chris!
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Nice lines, thanks.
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Thank YOU!
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This is such great writing my friend. You’ve used this image so well Susi. Thank you for joining in.
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You’re welcome! Thank you so much for your comment. I’m happy that you liked it. :)
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You’re very welcome
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Love the bit about not repeating mistakes!
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:) Let’s hope we don’t do that very often! Thanks, Val!
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Like the footprints indicate, we all walk the same path over and over. Love doesn’t care if you repeat your mistakes.
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Love doesn’t care, but I do! ;) Thanks for reading, Ahzio!
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Great write ✍️
Love this
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Happy you enjoyed it, Lamar!
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😍
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Am impressed reading your content 👌 thanks for sharing ❤
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Thank YOU! :)
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Great metaphorical poem, using a wilderness journey to point the way forward, well done.
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Appreciate that you picked up on that, Mason! :)
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