Silently, I begged for mercy, laying on the small patch of stitched scraps of flannel, cowering in the shadows of the small room made of blue stone, the air filled with the dust of past victims. The space hints at the macabre, forcing my heart to pulse rapidly. The terror within me was increasing. Between the wishes and the hope of release, my body began glistening with beads of sweat as a swarm of flies was approaching to nurture themselves on the crusted-over bloody gashes all over my body. The door slowly creaked open as my tears began to flow.


Frightening and intriguing, Susi!
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Yay, it came across that way! Thanks, Sara!
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Oh, so good and haunting, Susi!
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Glad I could pull it off, Eugenia! Thank you!
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You’re welcome, Susi!
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Wow Susi! Fantastic writing here! Xo
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<3 High praise, thank you, Carol Anne!
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Must be a trial script of a show that you have got contract for… lol 😊😊 Enjoyable indeed, thanks.
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I don’t, but thank you for that thought! Glad you enjoyed it. :)
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Horrifying! The unknown makes it more so!! (so good job in getting my heart rate up!)
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Oh, I like that! That is exactly how this story should read. Thank you, Val!
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Ooh! This is a very intriguing story Susi.
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Glad you think so, Sadje! :)
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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creepy! Sounds like an intro to the TV series Cardinal.
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Oh, that series sounds creepy too! Thanks, Ruth, I’ve bookmarked it. :)
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Yikes! Well written, I feel her.
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Thanks, Cheryl! Definitely yikes!
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Such an imagination you have! In a contest, you could win for sure! 👏
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lol Yeah, I really wonder where this comes from. I feel like I can write the most horrible things from my imagination, but I’ve never experienced them. Metaphorically, maybe, but not in real-life. :) Thanks, Nan!
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