Inspired by Moonwashed Weekly Prompt – Hospitality &
Reena’s Xploration Challenge #315
if only you would have afforded
the wounded inner child
the hospitality it deserved
trauma that needed nurture
saw minimal healing
shocking independence reigned
to the detriment of your essence
years upon years cycled by
as the dysfunction learned
predetermined the outcome
of the next generation
to be lost

Such a beautiful poem
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Thank you! :)
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This is so well said Susi.. If only is exactly write, Susi❣️
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<3 Appreciate that, Cindy!
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Absolutely, welcome❣️
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‘trauma that needed nurture’ Certainly, Susi. What a beautiful, thought provoking take on both the prompts.
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<3 Appreciate that, Indira!
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❤️❤️❤️
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It’s so sad when that happens, and it seems to happen in secret too often. But I like it that now more and more people are exposing this abhorrent hideous disservice done to the weak children put in their care. Such people are a shame to society. What’s done to them comes back and affects us all. Thanks for sharing this, Susi. Great with the prompt. Blessings.
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Yes, as am I. I feel like more people have access to healing the shame they feel. You’re welcome, Selma! I appreciate your kind words. :)
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A mind-stirring piece and a beautiful blending of prompts, Susi. 💟
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<3 I appreciate that so much, Eugenia!
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My pleasure, Susi!
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Beautifully combined both challenges. Indeed it needs nurture and care for wounds to heal.
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Yes, and a certain amount of acceptance. Thank you so much, Sadje!
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Indeed 🙏🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Wow, Susi. Excellent. Some of us have lived through that dysfunction
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<3 Thank you, Anita! Yes, indeed. Hopefully we all survived it.
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Very prophetic! Well done! 👍🏻
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Appreciate it, Gypsie-Ami!
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Wonderful poem and picture.
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Thanks so much, Pat!
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Beautiful poem, and yes trauma needs to be listened to.
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Absolutely! Thanks, Diana!
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You captured the spirit beautifully in a few lines.
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<3 Appreciate it, Reena!
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Wow Susi! This is awesome, good job on it! I love it! <3 <3
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So happy that you feel that way, Carol Anne! Thank you so much. <3
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