There was a bright flash, and then I felt caught by what I initially thought was an angel. Boy, I was so wrong! Only tiny pieces of my sanity remained when I felt the creature’s stray hairs brush my skin. Suddenly, I heard something loudly snap. I think the dappled blue creature broke my femur with its hands of eerily translucent skin! The last thing I saw was this furtive creature oogling my blood flow from the middle of my right leg. It dangled at a weird angle as the blood pumped out of me. Then it was light’s out.
I Write Her 
Great piece, lights out was a brilliant ending.
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Thanks so much, Diana! :)
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😀
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Ooow I felt that break!❌❤️❌
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Glad it came across so vividly! :)
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Yikes!!
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That’s what I was going for! ;)
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What a scary story Susi created from these words. Excellent
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Thank you, Sadje! Appreciate it. :)
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You’re most welcome
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