i know
fall is here
the warmth is slowly being replaced
with only slightly heated winds
the thick moisture
once heavy with density
begins to lose weight
and the sky shining less bright
anticipates the swollen clouds bearing snow
the cold winter will march in
to dominate our senses
until just before we can’t take it anymore
then spring relieves us
signaling a renewal
until summer begins to overheat us again
the change of seasons
life’s emotions unfolding in nature

This is beautiful ! <3 The ending gave me all the feels <3
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Thank you so much, Harman! <3 The emotions evoked by poetry are so precious!
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Love the last line. So true.
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Thanks, Kritika! :)
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:) :) Happy Sunday!
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It was a good day! Thank you, Kritika!
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So very good!!
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Appreciate your praise, Val!
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Thank goodness for the nice fall breeze! Great poem Susi
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Appreciate it, Belladonn! Yes, the record heatwaves are gone!
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Oh good for you!
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:)
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That final line is superb!
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Your praise means a lot, Nan! Thank you. <3
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Beautiful description. Love the last line – it really feels that way sometimes
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Thanks so much, VJ! Means a lot. :)
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Welcome Susi
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Seasons are changing and nature is beautiful.
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Indeed! Thank you.
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❤️
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I loved the last line of this Susi! A wonderful poem! <3
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Appreciate you saying so, Carol anne! <3
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So beautifully written
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<3 Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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