Inspired by Reena’s Xploration Challenge #290 &
Moonwashed Weekly Prompt – Noncommital
one lie does not erase a thousand truths
the memories of joy we’d created
the pasts we thought we’d heal in unison
the children we’ve raised together
the future we hoped to embody as one
allowing that lie in
letting it multiply
showed me something insidious
being noncommittal broke our foundation of trust
that one lie changed us forever

One lie will do it!!!
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Yes, it will!!
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Oh wow! Excellent poem Susi. So poignant.
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<3 Thank you so much, Sadje!
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It’s a pleasure 🥰
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Wow. That is a punch in the gut poem!!
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I’m glad that it came across with that kind of power. Thanks, Val!
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A sad scenario, but unfortunately, a common one. Nice job!
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Very common! Thanks, Nan! :)
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Excellent blending of prompts, and a brilliantly written piece, Susi! Brava!
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<3 Thank you so much, Eugenia!
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You’re welcome, Susi!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Game Changer ….by Susi Bocks
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As usual, you managed to combine both the prompts quite well 😊
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<3 Appreciate it, Reena! I do love a challenge! ;)
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