Redux
Don’t say

but rather…
soothe an ache
hold my hand
watch me sleep
rub my back
make me laugh
be with me
talk to me
play with me
dry my tears
keep me warm
listen to me
don’t be arrogant
kiss my lips
really know me
get me soup
touch without expectation
ease my sorrow
hug my soul
cry with me
dance with me
please be vulnerable
make eye contact
forgive my failings
care for yourself
sex me right
cook us dinner
walk with me
don’t lie, ever
read to me
hold me close
silence my demons
reach into me
never leave me
Originally posted on 9/25/2018, I Write Her.
Great poem Susi!
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Thanks so much, Belladonna! :)
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If only everyone could draw up such a list, the ladies especially 😁😅
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Honesty and communication are your best tools! :)
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It’s funny that when I read this piece, I was fully expecting a twist in the last two lines. But it didn’t happen. 😀
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lol I don’t always introduce plot twists. ;)
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I have found that out. 😂
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lol
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<3
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Thanks, Val! <3
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These are fantastic Susi! Sex me right is a personal favourite 😆
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;) Mine too! Glad you enjoyed it, Bree!
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These are actions that say love, without words. A beautiful poem.
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Thanks, Sadje! Yes, they are important!
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You’re most welcome
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