illuminating over the realm
we inhabit
toil is the name of the game
exhausting ourselves
giving in, giving up, giving
of ourselves until we can’t any longer
when it’s over, we retreat
putting the day to bed
yet
if only we could learn
to be like the sun
knowing that brilliance
is effortless when you’re on
every hour, every day
I Write Her 
Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Awesome 👍
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Thanks so much, Pratik!
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Welcome 🤗
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These are great lines!
if only we could learn
to be like the sun
knowing that brilliance
is effortless when you’re on
every hour, every day
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So glad you enjoyed them, Dwight! 🙂
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You are welcome!
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Yes, I most certainly need my rest. Lovely write Susi and I can’t be on every day no matter how hard I try. 🤗🌹🌷🌸🌺
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No worries, Joni! Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting. ❤
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oh yes to be like the sun.. love it Susi!❤️
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Happy that you liked it, Cindy! ❤
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It was wonderful!❤️
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❤
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I think sometimes we forget the brilliant light we create when we share the simpleness of ourselves
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So eloquently put, Anita! ❤
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Thank you
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The consistency of the sun rising is comforting…
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Yes, indeed. Thanks, Val!
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What a wonderful world it would be, if only…
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It’s an effort, to be sure. Thanks, Eugenia!
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You’re welcome, Susi.
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A nice inspiring ending
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Thank you, David!
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So beautiful Susi.
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❤ Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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Rest almost always reset our perspective. A lovely write.
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Thank goodness for that! 🙂 Thank you, Carrie!
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