Inspired by Sadje’s What do you see #138
the
water
calls to me
beckoning me
a boat welcomes my presence aboard
a red smile evident on the surface
tempting me more
to visit
island
seen
Inspired by Sadje’s What do you see #138
the
water
calls to me
beckoning me
a boat welcomes my presence aboard
a red smile evident on the surface
tempting me more
to visit
island
seen
I Write Her 
Beautiful, Susi.
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Thanks so much, Jude! :)
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love this and “a smile” was so well done and my lips turned up. love it! 💖
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So glad you liked it, Cindy. I didn’t see the “smile” until a bit later but then it just really completed the piece. Thank you! <3
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You’re so welcome. it soooo much did.. loved that. 1💖
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<3
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Beautiful smile image, Susi.
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Wish I could say it’s mine but glad I could “show” that, K :)
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I must agree! Great job
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Thank you so much, Belladonna! :)
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The line “a red smile evident on the surface” really made this for me!!
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Skillfully crafted, and vivid. Wonderful!
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Thank you so much! :)
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Of course!
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Very tempting, great ode!
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So happy you enjoyed it, Bill!
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Loved your take on this prompt!
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Thanks so much, Pooja! :)
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You’re very welcome!
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This is a lovely poem and a wonderful invitation. Thanks Susi for joining in
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Thanks, Sadje! <3
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You’re always welcome
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