my frazzled soul
lightens
then leans
into the beckoning of birdsong
drawing me in further
all my senses imbibe deeply
the multitude of earthtones
and various shades of green
the rapid flow of moisture
beguiling, mesmerizing
the rush of the river
grounds my senses
replaces tension with ease
and fills every pore of me
with enchantment
i am nourished...
This is a great poem Susi. Amazing how rushing water flowing over rocks in a stream can take the stress right out of your soul!
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Appreciate that, Dwight! Yes, I’m also a fan of forest streams, very soothing.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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fed a bi ped
look around
one step baaack
still lack so much
such it is as so
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The nature’s caper through your mesmerizing words. Golden
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So sweet of you to say, Shantanu! :)
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My absolute pleasure
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A perfect reminder that peace can be found in such places…
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Absolutely!
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A lovely meditation! I think I’ll read this one again in the morning as I do a little meditation to get my day started right!
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Thank you, Val! I’m so glad it gives you peace. :)
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Hmmm….. this sounds like a divine experience.
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:) Maybe?
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🥰
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much!! :)
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Beautiful Susi, it is amazing just how much peace I get from nature. Lovely piece. Hugs, Joni
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Same! I think the connection to the earth is really strong. Thanks, Joni!
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You are so welcome. ❤️
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A beautiful poem that perfectly captures the way nature can heal your soul. Well done👏
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Thanks, Christo! I appreciate it. :)
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