I do love the structure of this poem, really has you rolling along the river, so to speak! Enjoy the ride. 😉
the
river
flows
on
profound
streaks
crease
the
landscape
formed
with
time
in
mind
consciousness
a
constant
stream
the river flows eternal
I do love the structure of this poem, really has you rolling along the river, so to speak! Enjoy the ride. 😉
the
river
flows
on
profound
streaks
crease
the
landscape
formed
with
time
in
mind
consciousness
a
constant
stream
the river flows eternal
I Write Her 
as per neil diamond
bocks
river runs
new grown plums
la la la~
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Thanks for the reblog, Susi! 💚
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My pleasure, Mouse! ❤
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Lovely and it does have a beautiful rhythm to it. Hugs, Joni
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((hugs)) back to you, Joni!! 🙂
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Beautiful poem, and the structure is amazing
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So happy you liked it, Sadje!
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