i’ve clawed you from my head
a million times
the memories of you duller
but still there
each attempt at erasure
stings a little less
i will be rid of you
soon
i’ve clawed you from my head
a million times
the memories of you duller
but still there
each attempt at erasure
stings a little less
i will be rid of you
soon
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❤ !!
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Thank you so much, Penny! ❤
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I visualized blood under fingernails….. very raw and well written!
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I see you and I have the same imagination, Val! 😉 Thank you!
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I FEEL this, Susi!
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I’m glad I could evoke strong emotions with this piece, Sara!
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I like the breaking free in progression. And the tension in the descriptive words.
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Excellent, glad you took that away from this piece, Cassa. 🙂 Thanks!
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Very hard-hitting post, Susi
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Good! It was meant to! 😉 Glad you enjoyed it, Shweta!
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Always a pleasure 🙂
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grains of salt
malted milk
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Powerful words Susi
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❤ Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re welcome my friend
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Too deep…u have written it so beautifully 🙂
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Thank you, Dreamy Parakeet! 🙂
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I really like this, brutal honesty, just the way I like it, great piece my friend. Hugs, Joni
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Betrayal is brutal, the feelings of the aftermath definitely match it. Glad you enjoyed it, Joni! ❤
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I couldn’t agree more. Hard to trust once one betrays. Great stuff. Love ❤️ Joni
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Thanks, Joni! ❤
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