you’re cold as ice
my head and heart swirling
the end of us staring me in the face
may your destiny
hurt as much as my present
i’m hoping karma bites you in the ass, hard
you’re cold as ice
my head and heart swirling
the end of us staring me in the face
may your destiny
hurt as much as my present
i’m hoping karma bites you in the ass, hard
I Write Her 
Swirling works really well to describe the relationship in the first stanza.
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Thank you, Ken!
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Whoa! lot of anger there. very imaginative blend of the prompts Susi:)
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Ah, you caught that! Yes, there is. 😉 Glad you liked it, Radhika.
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Bloody Fate ….by Susi Bocks
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At times the only thing we can do is curse. The picture you chose is rivetting.
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So true. Glad you liked it, Reena. 🙂
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Wow, just so perfectly fitting both the prompts. 👏👏👏
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❤ You're so kind, Sadje! Thank you so much. 🙂
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You’re always welcome Susi
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🙂
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❤️
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Ahh nice one, you get back what you give, it may take awhile but karma is patient. 😉
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🙂 Thanks!
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Yeah, Susi! Love those last 3 lines! Karma kicks ass! Brava!
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Glad you enjoyed it, Eugenia! 🙂 Thanks! BTW, sent you an email for TSI.
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Wonder ful poem. I laughed at the thought of karma biting someone in the ass. It somehow seems like it could be one.
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Thanks, Molly! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 While I don’t believe in karma, life is so random, this thought would indeed be a pleasant thought. 😉
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There is sass and bite to these verses! Brava!
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Mission accomplished! Thanks, Val!
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it did
does i know
rather double vision
cos your ass
mebbe grass
but i still
wanna tee nine chee bit o ya luv
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Okay
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elton and retha s bdays. i m ya factoid buoy. bocks
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Okay
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