**TW – Story contains elements of domestic abuse
His temper was showing, and I began to believe I’d end up in my grave due to being barren. A plain pine box, I imagine. He was cheap like that. Mason would drop me into the earth (showing no bits of remorse) with a thud. Riddle me this, you brute! What’s valuable and filled with secrets? Now, you can’t hunt for my riches when I’m dead! I had the keys to untold fortunes before you went all ominous on my ass.
I was more angry than scared. Maybe I was just ready for death after all the years of abuse.


Wicked, Susi! A brevity of words says so much.
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Thanks so much for that, Sara!
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I loved the touch of strength in the story. Fabulous!
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Yes, a show of strength despite the air of defeat. Thanks so much, Kritika!
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A nice use of what was an awkward collection of words.
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I think it’s an “awkward collection of words” every week! Thanks, J!
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Amazingly emotional story… Bravo!
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Appreciate that, Val! Thank you. :)
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Fabulous Susi! <3 <3
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<3 Thank you so much, Carol Anne!
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Thank you, Diana!
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An evocative piece Susi. You’ve created intrigue and mystery in this
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Thanks, Sadje! I so enjoy these every Sunday. :)
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And you are so good at it too. 👍🏼👏🏼
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<3
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