My head felt woozy and groggy; I had to check to make sure I wasn’t in a dream or a hallucinogenic trance. The space and time of my surroundings felt surreal, my balance off. I cursed my current state. With my will passing rapidly and my energy low, I was aware of how pale I must look, trying to anchor myself to the doorframe—not a pretty sight. Slowly, I turned toward the sound of a trigger pulled back, indeed pointed at me; even with all this lethargy, forceful energy stirred in me, propelling me out of the line of fire.


Whoa! Very compelling, Susi!
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:) Glad you enjoyed it, Eugenia!
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Excellent story Susi. You’ve quite a talent to write stories out of random words. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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<3 Thank you, Sadje! Now, if I could make some money with that talent! lol ;)
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You’re very welcome. Writing delights the mind but seldom the pocket is filled.
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<3
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👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Very suspenseful!
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Thank you, glad you think so, Val!
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Wow, Susi! Fab story! xo
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Thanks, glad you liked it, Carol Anne! :)
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✨👏🏻✨ Susi ✨👏🏻✨
~David
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Thank you, David!!
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