It felt like we’d gone through the depths of hell carrying out this quest, our faithful crow flying alongside us. Sadly, we had to throw out most of our possessions. The loss stung a bit. I pushed back the wispy hair from my face pulling together the sheet, once holding everything together. The corn stalks protected us. I cautioned the elder accompanying me to be careful of the thistle plants dotting the field. Soon we’d reach the mountain’s crest, judging by the sun in the sky. But then, a violent tremor caught us off guard, throwing us to the ground.
I Write Her 
A captivating piece of writing.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Wow! Superb writing, Susi!
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❤ Thank you, Eugenia! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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My pleasure, Susi!
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This is marvelous Susi.
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❤ So glad you like it, Sadje!
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❤️
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great story starter…now for the rest of the story!
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lol That’s not how my wordles work. 😉 But thank you for the kindness, Christine!
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Hahaha, me neither. I have a folder on my computer of all my “stories” that I have started and then just never had it in me to continue.
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Oh, these aren’t starts, only teasers. 😉 I write them and tuck them away for good.
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nice work Susi! ❤
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