Inspired by Moonwashed Weekly Prompt #129 – Lovingly & Reena’s Exploration Challenge #267 – in that one moment
in that one moment
adoring me lovingly
didn’t know it would end
We were good, we were gold
Kinda dream that can’t be sold
We were right ’til we weren’t
Built a home and watched it burn
Mm, I didn’t wanna leave you
I didn’t wanna lie
Started to cry but then remembered I
I can buy myself flowers
Write my name in the sand
Talk to myself for hours
Say things you don’t understand
I can take myself dancing
And I can hold my own hand
Yeah, I can love me better than you can
Can love me better
I can love me better, baby
Can love me better
I can love me better, baby
Paint my nails, cherry red
Match the roses that you left
No remorse, no regret
I forgive every word you said
Ooh, I did not wanna leave you, baby
I didn’t wanna fight
Started to cry but then remembered I
I can buy myself flowers
Write my name in the sand
Talk to myself for hours, yeah
Say things you don’t understand
I can take myself dancing, yeah
I can hold my own hand
Yeah, I can love me better than you can
Can love me better
I can love me better, baby
Can love me better
I can love me better, baby
Can love me better
I can love me better, baby
Can love me better
Oh, I
I did not wanna leave you
I didn’t wanna fight
Started to cry but then remembered I
I can buy myself flowers (oh)
Write my name in the sand (mmh)
Talk to myself for hours (yeah)
Say things you don’t understand (never will)
I can take myself dancing, yeah
I can hold my own hand
Yeah, I can love me better than
Yeah, I can love me better than you can
Can love me better
I can love me better, baby (oh)
Can love me better
I can love me better (than you can), baby
Can love me better
I can love me better, baby
Can love me better
I Write Her 
Beautiful. Better to learn to let go as soon asap.
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Exactly! Thanks, Indira!
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Welcome, dear.
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YES SUSI!!!!! This is good girl!!!
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❤ You are so kind. Thank you, Belladonna!
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And you are so talented!
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❤
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Unexpected Passage …. by Susi Bocks
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It is a beautiful lyric. Nothing better than emotional freedom…
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Most definitely! Thanks, Reena!
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Lovely poem with a true to life ending…
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Thank you, Val! ❤
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Beautiful 😍
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❤ Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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My new favorite song! 🎵
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🙂 Mine too!
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Wow! You knocked this one out of the ballpark, Susi. Your poem and Miley’s song are a perfect combo for the prompt! Brava!
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❤ Thank you, Eugenia! So glad you enjoyed it! And I appreciate your praise. 🙂
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