Inspired by Moonwashed Weekly Prompt – Revelation &
Reena’s Exploration Challenge #266
hustle is the game at the start
the steam propels the drive
setting the pace of our youth
then aging signals the revelation
that life is slowing down
adjustments are made to lifestyle
accommodating the new stride
mental agitations are felt in our bodies
because we desire to achieve more
as time slips by
Nice Susi!
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Thanks so much, Belladonna!
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How true, Susi. ‘we desire to achieve more
as time slips by.’ Brilliant take.
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Yes, we do. 🙂 Thanks, Indira!
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❤️
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Reblogged this on Sharing Thoughts.
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I’m so glad the “hustle” has shifted to a “fox trot”. Nice write.
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Same! 😉 Thanks, Heather!
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You’re welcome.
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Very peace bringing. Thank you for this.
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I’m glad this evoked peace for you, Rei! 🙂
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Nice one, Susi. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Aishwarya! 🙂
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Wonderfully penned…loved your thoughts
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Changes …by Susi Bocks
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We also become choosy on what we desire to achieve.
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Absolutely! Prioritization is key.
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The story of our lives. So well written Susi.
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❤ I appreciate that, Sadje!
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My pleasure
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Oh, how true this is, Susi! Brilliant take on the prompts.
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❤ Thank you so much, Eugenia!
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You’re welcome, Susi.
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this was great, Suzi! xo
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Oh how well I know! Good progressive description. 👏
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❤ Thank you, Nan! Yeah, me too! 😉
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