lost in this mental quagmire
feeling it in my bones
thoughts run to escape the myths
created in my head
questions thick with sinew
yet the answers are willowy
should i pray
and light three candles
as the glum begins trickling in
my spirits growl
hearing the hum of birds
wishing for peace
in a world unbalanced
Unbalanced to the extreme! I love the way you build on the emotion…
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Thank you, Val! I’m glad I could do that. ❤
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Superbly penned, Susi!
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❤ Means a lot, Eugenia. Thank you!
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My pleasure, Susi!
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Willowry is a tough word to write, great work!
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Thanks, Carrie! Yeah, I was worried but eventually it came to me. 🙂
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I just looked it up, willowy also means slender. I learned a new word. 🤓
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lol Something I have to work towards! 😉
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😂
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Very well written Susi
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Thanks, Mich! I appreciate that so much! ❤
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*applause*
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❤ Thanks so much, David! 🙂
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Beautifully written Susi.
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❤ Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re welcome my friend
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Nicely done!! 😊
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Thanks so much, Gypsie-Ami! 🙂
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You are very welcome Susi! 😊
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cool.
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Appreciate that, Ruth! 🙂
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I too pray for peace every day.
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How clever to use Wordle as a source of inspiration!
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Most times I’m inspired to write a 100 word story but sometimes it clicks with poetry. 🙂 Thanks, Jorge!
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