The strong breeze carried the seeds away after causing the dandelion’s stem to sway violently. Tears began to bleed from my eyes, producing liquid clouds hindering my view. This scene viscerally brought back a bittersweet memory, a sadly uplifting boon to my psyche. Yet, I wonder—when will I get my reprieve from the anguish of the past?
The tree branches above my head clashed together like the rhythmic grinding of my teeth masticating a small square of beef jerky. I watched the swift stream of the river as my conflicting emotions began to climb and tangle again.
Let it go…
Love this, Susi. It held me all the way through.
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Wonderful, Sarah!
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WOW! This was AMAZING!! The picture caught my attention so I clicked on your link in the discover section and your words held me captive!
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Thank you for your generous praise! 🙂
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Absolutely!
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🙂
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Well done, Susi!
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❤ Thank you so much, Eugenia! 🙂
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Lovely word trip you just took me on Susi!
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Glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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This reminds me of my grief journey….
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((hugs)) ❤
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This drabble was vibrant and skillfully crafted. Bravo!
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❤ I appreciate you think so! 🙂
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I sure do!
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🙂
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You’ve crafted a vibrant story from these random words Susi.
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❤ I'm glad you liked it, Sadje! 🙂
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Well done
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❤ Thank you, Anita! 🙂
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