Redux
It’s cold and lonely next to you.
Freezing.
What to do, to break through?
Open up.
Let me in.
I can’t.
I hurt because of you.
You lied.
I cried.
Then I died.
I’ll change.
I promise.
You deserved better.
I know that now.
I’m sorry.
Please forgive me.
No.
Powerful. Sending you a virtual hug.
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Happily accepted! Thanks so much, Joyce!
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Yay! You’re welcome. ^_^
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Excellent poem on the misery of giving second chances.
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Awesome, so glad you liked it, Sadje! ❤
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You’re most welcome
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Great ending. 🙂
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Thanks, JeanMarie! ❤
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I loved this. even though I felt the pain…
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❤ Thank you so much. Glad I could convey that.
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