Inspired by Sadje’s What do you see #135
nature surrounds us
the delicate breeze
entangles the tree branches
as we breathe in green waves of fresh air
dainty flowers rise up to greet us
painting a pretty picture
the birds follow along our path
filling our space with lovely melodies
clasping your hand
and meeting your eyes
i feel connected to everything
and yet still distinctly separate
The last line..the distinctly separate resonated deeply with me. The connection and the distance co-exist so beautifully.
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I’m glad that line resonated with you, Bridgette! Thank you!
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I love the lines about feeling connected yet still distinctly separated. Nature makes you aware of both your connection to the world around you and your individuality, both of which are so inspiring
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Exactly! 🙂 Thanks so much for stopping by and your thoughts.
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A beautiful poem Susi! I felt the nature surrounding me and it’s peace. Thanks for joining in
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Exactly! Nature is a healer. 🙂 Always a pleasure to, Sadje!
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Thanks a lot Susi
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You’re welcome!
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💕💜
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Lovely write Susi and I really like your last two lines… 👌 A profound ending.
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Thanks, Bree! Appreciate the praise. 🙂
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Gorgeous and beautiful nature connection Susi! 💖💖
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Yes, those are wonderful moments to cherish. Thanks, Cindy!
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They sure are Susi. You’re so welcome!!! 💖💖
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A experience only nature can give us Susi …
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Exactly! It’s contentment, peace, satisfaction, harmony, connection—all wrapped up into one. 🙂 Thanks, Ivor!
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My pleasure Susi
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Speaks of the hopefulness of new love – when all of creation seems to be singing along!
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And that as well, Val! Good pick up. 🙂
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My pleasure Susi.
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🙂
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Beautiful! Connectedness with nature.
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Yes, it is an exquisite feeling! Thanks, Suzette!
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