Inspired by Sadje’s What do you see #128
the cobwebs of the day grew thicker
even coffee proved useless
after three ten-hour shifts
mucking around in and on the bodies of those ravaged
by detrimental accidents necessitating ER visits
an assembly line of in-home, highway, work, and all other accident producing places
a mild laceration from slicing oranges
to a hand versus garbage disposal situation
or fists breaking windows following jaws broken by fists
to anaphylactic shock from eating peanuts
using a scale of 1 – 10
i witnessed and fixed hundreds of every number
i was exhausted
it was time to go home
my decision to stay for the third shift
may not have been my best
as i watched cones laid around
my mangled car
the overturned truck and its driver
unconscious but thankfully breathing, unlike me
my dead and bloodied body on the pavement still
the red life liquid from my corpse almost reaching the closest cone
if only i’d stayed in my lane
that’s a really bad sign…
oh NO!
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David
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Oh no, is right! π Glad you enjoyed it, David! β€
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Wow! That’s a poem and a half, Susi, great ending. πβ€β
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π Thanks, Carolyn! Glad you liked it. π
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Wow! Very dark and painful. Wonderfully done!
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Yes, but sadly the possible reality when people in the medical field are asked to endure those kinds of hours. Thank you, Mason! π
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They do in the UK. Some doctors and Nurses do 48hr shifts. There is no way that’s safe in terms of diagnosis and treating properly. No way it should be legal and after that length of work, they should never be allowed to drive until they sleep either. Terrible really.
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Agreed.
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Youβve put so much heartfelt agony into your piece Susi. Exceptionally moving. Thanks a lot for joining in
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Having seen so many highway accidents, that image inspired me to remember them. Thank you, Sadje.
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Youβre welcome my friend
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Chilling!
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Many lessons to be learned. π Thanks, Val.
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