The putrid smells bombarded my senses, like rain over raw sewage or shots of oysters gone bad. Tears started to leak from my eyes, and I began to miss working narcotics.
A body found at the scene smelled much like the noxious air, probably why the killer used this dumpsite.
A repetitive buzz sounded. With a slight hesitation, I reached for the victim’s vibrating phone. It was the mother. I cut straight to the facts with little emotion, getting off the phone quickly.
The killer had brushed cow manure on the body after nailing her to the barn door. Why?
Darkly delicious! Love the cow photo.
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So glad you thoughts so, Sarah!
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Ooh! Nice and dark, this one! I enjoyed the descriptive set-up. Well done!
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Thanks! ๐ Glad to know you enjoyed it.
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oh my!! very dark! ๐๐ป
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That’s what I was going for! ๐
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I’d be wondering about the maniac killer, shivering as I think about the gruesome act.
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Most definitely! The killer is still around! ๐
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He deserves a continuation, or may be the mystery and a cliff hanging end is always better. The mind can always imagine!
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lol As most of the 100 word stories I write! Maybe one of these days I will “elongate” them but for now, they are all teasers. ๐
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A grim crime story! Great use of the prompts Susi
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๐ Thanks, Sadje!
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Youโre welcome
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Great story! You ‘nailed’ those prompt words.
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Thanks, Susan! ๐
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Oh shit โฆ โ or shots of oysters gone badโ I can smell the awful stench from here in Geelong ..
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lol Yeah, it would be nasty!
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I’ve said it before … but once again: You are VERY good at this!! ๐โค
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โค Thank you, Nan! I appreciate that. ๐
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So supensfull and entertaining loved it
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Thanks so much, Joann! Glad you enjoyed it. ๐
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You packed a terrific punch into that short piece.
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I tried! Glad you thought so, Pat! ๐
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Gross and tragic. Why is the question and now I’m going to wonder for the rest of the day…
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lol Definitely gross! Always tragic, it seems. ๐ oh no! Hopefully it won’t keep you up at night.
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Wow!
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Wow good or wow gross?
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Wow, like a delightful surprise.
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Wonderful! Happy you liked it, Geoff! ๐
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I like how each cow has a unique look to it. Very cool!
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They looked like they were at the crime scene. ๐
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