thoughts left aside
words deliverable
yet unspoken
become
all that
which is unknowable
connection remaining unattainable
when understanding remains hazy
in my purview
Inspired by Reena’s Exploration Challenge #215 – Unknowable & Unexplainable &
Eugenia’s Weekly Prompt – Hazy
I Write Her 
This is beautifully written, Susi.
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I appreciate that, Kristin! 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Disclosure …. by Susi Bocks
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You bring up a good point on ‘unattainable connections’ leading to ‘unknowability’.
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Actually, it’s the unknowable that leads to unattainable connections.
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😂😂
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A poignant piece Susi. Food for thought. Love the photo!
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Thank you, Suzette. Yes, the image ‘clearly’ depicts the word ‘hazy’ as well as the isolation. 😉
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Nicely done. Yes, indeed Susi.
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Appreciate your praise, Suzette!
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You are most welcome, Susi.
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Great use of the prompts to write a beautifully poem Susi.
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Thanks so much, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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In my hazy courtyard, it’s unexplainable what I say to the moon, and there is that unknowable connection received back from my unattainable moon
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Oh, I like yours, Ivor! 🙂 Perfect song to accompany it.
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Thank you Susi, .. and I went over and put it on Eugenia’s prompt … thanks for the link
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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The walls we build, that we refuse to take down and the words that are never said that need to be said. Great poem.
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You are absolutely right, Anita! We need to remember not to end the conversation. Thanks for your continued support! 🙂
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Superb weaving of prompts, Susi! Thank you for joining in.
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❤ Thanks, Eugenia, always!!
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Love your poetry! Keep up the good work.
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Thanks for your kindness, Jorge! 🙂
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