Poetry Partner #38 at The Skeptics Kaddish!

Published on by Susi Bocks

As a poet, I prefer being a loner. I should say usually. Recently, however, I decided to step out of my comfort zone a bit and collaborate with David of The Skeptics Kaddish. What prompted me to was the beauty of ALL the pieces which have been posted to date. David is a wonderful poet who complements the original inspiration. The poetry he produces enhances them so beautifully!

I hope you enjoy this collaboration and please do visit his blog for more incredible writing!

woman lying on dried grass nature photography
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Disappearance, or: Endurance 

Poetry Partners #38 

‘My Disappearance’ by Susi Bocks of ‘I Write Her’ 

it’s my nature
to withdraw
when unbalanced
for no reason at all 

i retreat to a safe space
like bear cubs denning 
i’m not languishing 
i’m dormant with melancholy

seeking shelter protects my soul
giving respite and comfort
surrounded by nothing but time
it revives me 

A double acrostic blank verse poem by ben Alexander of ‘The Skeptic’s Kaddish’ 

Dormant with melancholy, defeated, 
I seek shelter like a wounded yeti;
surround myself with simple memories; 
and hibernate. Depleted by drama, 
paws torn in frantic escape, I’m a pup– 
py, fearful, distrustful, fitful in sleep. 
Everywhere, even within me, foes lie, 
anticipating my imminent plea. 
Respite’s always brief. Would I had armor 
against the greed, gossip and media 
nonsense. Ultimately, I always bow in 
concession, perhaps the greatest cynic
ever. That’s how I can stand to surface. 

34 thoughts on “Poetry Partner #38 at The Skeptics Kaddish!”

  10. This is so beautiful and relatable😭. I felt like I was reading a poem written for me! Both poems flow seamlessly well. Particularly the way the 2nd poem gives more depth to the 1st. It’s brilliant❤️

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