Inspired by Eugenia’s Weekly Prompt – Jubilant
as we weave towards our end
rushing insanely
the bends slow us down
moments of floating
pleasurable and relaxing
harnessing our strength
the undertow
at times
sucking us down
yet jubilant moments
keep us bobbing
on the river of life
time trickles to near stop
and the river bed dries to dust
as we weave towards our end
I Write Her 
Lovely well-constructed poetry I love the line about jubilant moments. 🙂❤👩🦰
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❤ Thanks, Carolyn! Appreciate your praise!
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Ah, what a ride those jubilant moments are! Masterly penned.
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They make it all worth it! Thanks so much, Goff!
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Most certainly. Happy Christmas, Susi.
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“the bend slows us down” – indeed. Well written.
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Thanks, VJ! Speaking of slowing down, is your rest helping?
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You’re welcome, Susi. Rest has been somewhat helpful. Tests lined up for the New Year, so hopefully some answers.
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Oh, good! Glad to hear it. May you get all the answers you need, VJ! Until then continue to keep taking care of you! ❤
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Awesome. Jubilant moments………
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Thank you, Indira!! I’m glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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Absolutely spot on Susi. Life moves on relentlessly and the good moments keep us afloat
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You’re so kind, Sadje. Thank you!
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Always a pleasure my friend
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Life is full of ups and downs but your stanza
“yet jubilant moments
keep us bobbing
on the river of life”
tells us to enjoy the journey and don’t give up!
Awesome piece, Susi!
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Absolutely, we keep fighting! Glad you enjoyed it, Eugenia!
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My pleasure, Susi!
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