
Inspired by Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie – Saturday Mix & Sadje’s What do you see? #104
aye this forest brook soothes
the dancing water
an aural fascination
my eye focuses on the comforting flow
I
am at peace
contented sighs
escape my oral cavity
‘Aural fascination’ is another linguistic treat after Eugenia’s ‘fantasies swirling’. Compliments!
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Thanks so much, Reena! ❤
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Beautiful. Loved aural and oral, amongst others.
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Appreciate that, Jude! ❤
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A fantastic take and poem, Susi. ❤️
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I appreciate your praise, Jeff! ❤
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Is my complete pleasure, Susi. Always! ❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Delightful, Susi! A clever combination of the prompts 🙂
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Thanks so much, Chris! 🙂
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so lovely Susi..
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Thanks so much, Mich!
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I love this meditative atmosphere. The only moment is the forced use of the word oral. But I know that was the prompt. Still good – better than I could do!!
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That’s true, nature is so meditative. Yes, I would agree. The other words seemed easier to interject. Thanks for the praise, Val!
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Beautiful, peaceful environs give us feelings of peace and contentment. Thanks Susi for joining in with this lovely poem.
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Definitely. Thanks for the invitation, Sadje! 🙂
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My pleasure
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extraction bocks?
how erotic.
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