So much gratitude to Gabriela and MasticadoresUSA for accepting this piece to share with their readers. ❤
MasticadoresUsa // Editor: Barbara Leonhard

Perpetual Pain
by Susi Bocks
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no one told me
the days of mourning
linger for years
those unforgotten bring us
more bitter than sweet memories
unexpectedly and forcefully
it rises up within us
tears well and overflow incessantly
this insanity of grief, tortuous
when you love hard
you hurt more
death really kills two people
@Susi Bocks
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MasticadoresUSA was founded byJuan Re Crivello as part ofGobblers/Masticadoresin 2021. Its current editor isGabriela Marie Milton.
MasticadoresUSA features talented writers of poetry and short prose. We primarily publish writers who write in English, and are based in the USA. However, while the publication language remains English, we also welcome the work of our fellow writers from all over the world.
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“death really kills two people”, true. 🙂
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Yes, I felt it. Thanks, Aishwarya!
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You are welcome, Susi. 🙂
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Grief lives for a lot longer than any of us wish, but tends to be proportional to the degree of loss. Be well!
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It does, you’re so right. Thank you, Jorge!
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So true. ‘ when you love hard
you hurt more
death really kills two people’ BEAUTIFUL.
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❤ Thank you, Indira!
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Your words are true. Some mourning stays with us dear Susi. I believe lessons for us to be kinder to the people near. Thank you Susi for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
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❤ Appreciate that, John!
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Great Poem Susi and Congratulations. going to read it on Masticadores now. 💖
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Thanks so much, Cindy! ❤
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You’re most welcome
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I loved this poem, Susi. There is a note for you on the Masticadores site too. Wonderfully created. ❤️
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And I responded to your comment. Thank you, thank you so much for your love and support, Jeff! ❤
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Is always my pleasure, Susi! You’re most welcome. Always. ❤️
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Ah, so true. Congratulations!
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Thank you, Heather! 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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oh this makes me feel the hurt…
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((hugs)) and thank you, Freya!
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This is such a poignant poem Susi. Congratulations
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Thank you, Sadje! ❤
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You’re welcome my friend
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Congratulations! This one deserves a greater audience!!
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I agree! 😉 Thanks so much, Val! ❤
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Congratulations, Susi! Lovely piece. ❤
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Appreciate it, Jaya! ❤
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Congratulations on a wonderful publication Susi! ❤️
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Thanks so much, Ingrid! ❤️
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Congratulations, Susi!
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Thank you, Punam!! ❤️
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You are welcome. ❤️
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