Inspired by Eugenia’s Weekly Prompt – Sustain & Reena’s Exploration Challenge #198
will it support or undermine
will it strengthen me or cause me to suffer
seems the word sustain is a conundrum
as i pursue this challenge
finding it hard to determine
what direction to take
but why, when the obvious is evident
it was an honest mistake
nothing to learn
nothing to gain
slipped some erroneous info
none of my concern
… moving on
I laughed at the end. Not because of the poem, which is very good by the way . I laughed because I saw the title and thought Great. I need to detach from the moment I’m having. Maybe this will have instruction. 🙂 No instruction but a nice diversion.
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I’m glad you had a laugh, JeanMarie. We can all use them now and then. 🙂 Thanks for the praise!
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What a very cleaver piece. Just love this! So true as well. Sending you a big southern hug and some love. xoxoxo Joni
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Appreciate that, Joni!! ❤
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My pleasure!! ❤️
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we all move on bocks.
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Punctuation changes the meaning or did you mean to order a directive? 😉
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Nice one, Susi. Always moving….indeed. ❤️
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❤ Thanks so much, Jeff! 🙂
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Welcome, Susi! Always. ❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Nice completely advisable on pic about written .
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Thank you!
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I was at first confused than after reading the prompts it all made perfect sense! Moving on….
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❤ Glad it did, Val! 🙂
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This was slick word play and meaning, in using these prompts.
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Oh, that’s an awesome compliment, Elle! ❤ Thank you so much! 🙂
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A worthy one, You’re welcome. 😊
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🙂
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Detaching …… By Susi Bocks
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Moving on is an act of strength.
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Or signals indifference.
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Right!
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A brilliant take on both prompts, Susi!
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❤ Thanks, Eugenia! Glad you liked it! 🙂
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Most welcome, Susi! 😊
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Works both ways. Wonderfully done Susi.
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Yes, it does! Thanks, Sadje! 🙂
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You’re welcome
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