Inspired by Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Saturday Mix – Opposing Forces – Love, Hate, Rain, Drought
love me so hard
that i’ll hate you for stopping
this tidal rain of passion
when over
leaving me in a drought
and in a wrecked state
where is this man
bringing me to ecstasy
ushering forth
the epitome of having a stroke
never mind, i’ll just put myself in a coma
lovely piece and had to giggle at your last line – great stuff, xoxox Joni
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Tee hee! π Glad you enjoyed it, Joni!
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I appreciated the humor Susi I have never mastered the art of adding humor to my work but I always enjoy it when I read a poem with humor. Hope you have an amazing week. Hugs π€ Joni
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Thanks, the same for you, dear Joni! π
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Oh Susi, This is such an awesome piece!! I Loved It! Especially your first line –
“love me so hard
that iβll hate you for stopping”
and your last line too – “never mind, iβll just put myself in a coma” – you cracked me up with that line!
Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!!
πππΉπΉ
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LOL So happy you enjoyed it, Chuck!! β€
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Dont’ Miss Reading This!!!!
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Where, indeed?
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LOL right?!?! π
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Great take on the prompt!
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Thanks, Val! π
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Love the first stanza – great use of the words
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Thanks so much, Sarah! π
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if i came inside
your body nor mind
would i deride
only politely ask for more
please
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Consent is always important! π
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horse latitudes will join blue sunday. whine ~ delicate. consent in mutual nostril agony , the first animal is jettisoned~! j morrison
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Love that last line. π
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π Thanks! Isn’t that mostly the way it happens?!?! π lol
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Youβre welcome πΊ
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