no
need or
want for gifts
but please do light
my essence on fire with your state of mind
breathe life into me again with your love
honoring our
two broken
souls and
hearts
no
need or
want for gifts
but please do light
my essence on fire with your state of mind
breathe life into me again with your love
honoring our
two broken
souls and
hearts
I Write Her 
“but please do light
my essence on fire with your state of mind” – The whole thing is fantastic but this bit is my favourite.
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Thank you so much! That line is how it all started. 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Beautiful, beautiful, Susi. I love it. ❤️❤️
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Thank you, Jeff! Your support means a lot! ❤
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You’re welcome, Susi! Always my pleasure! ❤
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mr mister
broken wings
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Great song!
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it is.
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wooden ships and lil purple pills.
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Oh my, you have an eclectic taste in music. 🙂
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rock n roll. both versions of wooden ships.
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Oh, I thought Eminem on the Purple Pills one.
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no . not a rapper.
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I’m not a big fan of the genre but I do like Eminem.
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makes one of us. lmao. mr mathers i think
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LOL Yup.
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i m good at aliases. myself jim a john and main tormentor son tim a tom~
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So let me see if I got this – your name is John and alias is Jim. You have a son named Tom and alias Tim?
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almost. i sold my vw rabbitt to an iranian in 1987 and he referred to me as jim a john. got a cool seven hundred bucks too.
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From now on I will call you Jim/John too. 😉
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true story. my late mother thought he was full of shit. so i went back to her and pealed off the benjamin s like in that u2 song bullit the blue sky. it shut her up
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Hmmm, why wouldn’t she believe you?
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cos i was jaime rabbinowitz seeking money for the jews against christian alliance.
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Ok
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A beautiful poem Susi.
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❤ Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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As a ceramicist I enjoyed this one!! Well done!
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Glad you liked it, Val! I was sure there had to be someone who could identify! Have you shared pics of your work on your blog?
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Beautiful. ❤️🔥
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Thanks, Elle! ❤
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You’re most welcome, Susi. 🙂
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